校学生会将举办义卖活动以资助贫困地区的儿童上学。请你写一份通知,内容包括:?介绍活动的目的;?号召大

                               NOTICEThe Students’ Union of our school is scheduled to hol…

                               NOTICEThe Students’ Union of our school is scheduled to hold a charity sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area. The efforts to be made are to support these children to continue their school education.You are kindly asked to donate some of your items which you don’t use but might be of some use to others,such as some school supplies and used textbooks.At 9 am this Saturday,the charity sale starts at the lecture hall of our school. We are expecting you to come and offer a helpful hand. And remember all the money will go to the support of those needy children.

试题分析:本篇书面表达要求写一份通知。在写作时要注意此类通知的格式,通常上方正中写Notice或NOTICE(通知),发出通知的单位名称可放在正文前,也可放在正文后,右下角处。一般通知的开头要交代清楚活动的内容、对象、时间和地点。在句式写法上必须注意以下几点:①尽可能用精炼的文字表达明确的信息,多用简单句或短句、单句,以避免繁杂;②通知往往着重对活动内容、对象进行说明,多用被动语态,如“The class meeting will be held…”(班会将举行……)等等;③通知中所告知的事情大部分是未进行的,故多用一般将来时态。【亮点说明】本篇范文要点全面,形式上完全符合通知文体的要求,首先在开头交代清楚活动的内容、对象、时间和地点。从形式上看,通知的几大部分一应俱全。如标题部分是NOTICE;正文部分中的活动内容是“to hold a charity sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area. T”;参加的方式和要求及参加这项活动的对象是“our school”,该活动的时间是“At 9am。”;此外文章的语言表述简练流畅、措辞得当、文章内容上下衔接紧凑。

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